Good story. Good storytelling. I love the short sentence quips. I love the "Bob" digression. The play with the words know and don't know. The reader gets drawn into that as well, either knowing or not knowing the meaning of the last sentence. I really like this.
Good story. Good storytelling. I love the short sentence quips. I love the "Bob" digression. The play with the words know and don't know. The reader gets drawn into that as well, either knowing or not knowing the meaning of the last sentence. I really like this.
"What I didn't now what that my dad had a secret." Oh, yes. Our secrets. His secret. The disclosing. The revealing.